Text at top-keep it all the same font, effect and colour. Don't overdo it. Probably just say "win Craig David concert tickets" is enough. No need for TEN.
In page numbering stick to one convention. Do not use the P. Just use the number. It will stand out more.
36 Techno remixes, make sure the text all fits in the box
Text required in 24 and 36. even if it is just the artist name.
P24 rocking omiter to the top needs editing, why not just "Rockometer competition"
One next to P5 needs something in there too.
We can talk about it tomorrow. Come and find me at Lunchtime, I'll be in room 11 or ICT office.
We'll also need to talk briefly about your front cover. To simplify it slightly and use white space better.
Don't be disheartened, all this drafting is good. It will improve your work.
Thought for the day "Less is more". Keep it simple and communicate the message with the least effort possible.
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Text at top-keep it all the same font, effect and colour. Don't overdo it. Probably just say "win Craig David concert tickets" is enough. No need for TEN.
In page numbering stick to one convention. Do not use the P. Just use the number. It will stand out more.
36 Techno remixes, make sure the text all fits in the box
Text required in 24 and 36. even if it is just the artist name.
P24 rocking omiter to the top needs editing, why not just "Rockometer competition"
One next to P5 needs something in there too.
We can talk about it tomorrow. Come and find me at Lunchtime, I'll be in room 11 or ICT office.
We'll also need to talk briefly about your front cover. To simplify it slightly and use white space better.
Don't be disheartened, all this drafting is good. It will improve your work.
Thought for the day "Less is more". Keep it simple and communicate the message with the least effort possible.
See you tomorrow.
Mr Lau
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